UndyingSong's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smoke Trick]

It seems like drawing in your own text can be best sometimes, but overall you want to center your dialogue within the speech bubbles. Treat the bubbles themselves as though they are frames, and the dialogue as if it is the artwork within the frame.
"Making Comics" by Scott McCloud is a FANTASTIC guide if you wanna read more on the subject. :D
Anyway, THIS IS GREAT! Lupin and Jigen are the best aaaaa

wappa responds:

I see, thank you very much! I'll be sure to take your advice

[Not Yet]

He's still got fight left in 'em!! Damn I love this.

BunnyLoop responds:

Thanks so much <3

[Oni Lady]

Dang it your style is SO FUN, I can't stop staring 👀

BunnyLoop responds:

Same goes for yours, please keep posting <3

[JockJam DoorSlam]

Don't be sad. Good horsie. ♡

Drawsputin responds:

*Pets him with broom hand*

.....That actually feels kind of nice.

[Sharing Lunch]

Love this expressive style :0

BunnyLoop responds:

I'm doing my best to do as I do on paper, unlike I've done up until now. I'm glad I'm receiving so much positive feedback.

[Group Photo]

I bet these guys can get up to some mischief when they're in the mood. x3 Nice work!

Lockengine responds:

All sorts. Knitting badly coordinated jumpers, tiddly winks in public, just general mischief :P Thank you for the feedback x3 :)

[Nessa's Defeat]

This is great, lovely coloring! My only suggestion would be to lower her boobs some so they can rest just a bit closer to her arms. Breasts do not grow quite so near to the neck area ^^

Edit: Oh cool! May I see the ref? I'm not sure I've ever seen a lady in this pose with breasts positioned so high. ^^'

XPISigmaArt responds:

Thanks for the critique. This was actually referenced with some foreshortening and such, the breasts were indeed there. There is also plenty of curvature to the spine, which warrants it! Human bodies are nuts.

[Bloody Garuda]

DAMN, this is total perfection. 💖

CompleteAlienation responds:

Thank you!

[Kim Possible(Colored by Cessa)]

Awesome coloring and highlights! :D

Pokkuti responds:

Credit goes to Cessa :)

[Cute little boy]

Aaawww grumpy fella. x3

BaumKatze responds:

uwu